Improvements needed...

-Original model needed for cover photo.
-Different angles of photos needed.
-Different setting for photo's.
-Different texts needed for front cover and DPS.
-Different colours needed for DPS on article.
-Gaps between Q and A and the pararaph at the top needs to be bigger.

Mr Nicolle feedback summary...

No surprises as you already know it's your pictures that need more work. Consider the setting, mise-en-scene more carefully as well as cutting and cropping. Also editing to achieve your desired effect.
Front cover- too much white space on the background. Most of font is the same size. Check against research.
Low level 2.

Mr Smith Feedback sheet...

Lauren Kruge Feedback

Feedback from Shannon...

Lauren Assessment

DPS draft...

Contents draft...

Front Cover Draft...

This is the first proper draft of my front cover. This is not the model I will be using on my finished piece but the model I wanted was not available in time for this draft.